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On Finishing my First Screenplay

Wednesday, December 7th, 2005 at 4:50 am

This morning, I finished my first feature length screenplay. It was 102 pages long. I printed it out, hole punched it, placed brads in the top, bottom (but not middle) holes, and turned it in.

It was satisfying. So satisfying I almost want to change the font of this website to 12pt courier. Almost.

In having finished my first one, I already want to start my next. I know I should be revising the one I just wrote or something, but in all likelihood, that screenplay would never be made into a film so forget the follow through.

My screenplay is called Written on Water. It’s loosely based on the life of Eileen Chang. Very loosely. If it ever got made into a film, fans of Eileen Chang would be screaming injustice.

I don’t know what I was thinking when I began writing. It was a hard first project. I should’ve done something I knew more about. Let it be a project for developing my voice as a writer rather than telling the story.

Like all art, one has to start with technique, then find their identity and define their content. I skipped right to the content. But who cares, really? I have a 102 page screenplay and it was damn satisfying.

Movie Review: Pride and Prejudice

Friday, November 25th, 2005 at 10:55 pm
Pride and Prejudice

Movie title: Pride & Prejudice
Starring: Keira Knightley, Matthew MacFayden, Brenda Blethyn, Donald Sutherland, Rosamund Pike, Judi Dench, Jena Malone, Simon Woods
Directed by: Joe Wright
Written by: Jane Austen (novel), Deborah Moggach (screenplay)
Genre: Drama, Romance
Year: 2005

Call me skeptical. As a die-hard fan of the 5-hour BBC version of Pride and Prejudice featuring Colin Firth and Jennifer Ehle, you can hardly blame me for thinking it impossible for capturing the scope of the story in a mere two-hours. After having seen the new film, I can fairly say it does not capture the scope of the entire story, but this new Pride & Prejudice can certainly hold its own grounds.

This 18th century costume drama runs on a pace to match that of a modern suspense, but settles down comfortably enough. For those less familiar with the classic story, the film centers on the Bennets, a family with 5 daughters who face a life of poverty upon their father’s death. Mrs. Bennet (Brenda Blethyn) dedicates her life existence to marrying off her daughters. The film opens as a young man of good fortune, Mr. Bingley (Simon Woods), moves into the county and quickly takes a liking to the eldest of the Bennet girls, Jane (Rosamund Pike). Around the same time, the second eldest, Lizzie (Keira Knightley), takes a strong disliking to Mr. Bingley’s friend, Mr. Darcy (Matthew MacFayden) who finds her too plain to tempt him. As the story progresses, Lizzie finds herself drawn to Mr. Wickham, a man who claims to be wronged by Darcy in the past, and the object of Mr. Colins, the foolish-minded heir of the Bennet estate. Ultimately, it is a love story between Lizzie and Darcy, one about overcoming prejudices and class barriers to reveal the true characters of two people who were meant for each other. Of course, we rush through it too fast to get that much, but it was an honest attempt.

What saves the film is the fact that director Joe Wright focuses far less on the theatrical absurdities of the story but instead takes a much more sensitive approach to the characters. The script lacks wit and is the low point of the film, but Wright makes up for it by brilliantly playing with the nuances of its characters and situations, especially in terms of their resulting awkwardness. Most of the film resides purely within the subtleties of every character, something which no other adaptation of the novel has accomplished to date.

The tone of the film is refreshing. There is a certain raw beauty in its cinematography, something Hollywood films consistently lack. Everything from the overexposed exteriors, to the stray farm animals, or the stringy curls of Keira Knightley’s hair adds to a certain realism of the English countryside.

For the fans of the BBC production who were wondering – yes, the film is as sexually tame as the BBC; no, you will not see Mr. Darcy emerging from a pond dripping wet; yes, Keira Knightley is a convincing Lizzie; no, Matthew MacFayden is not as good as Colin Firth (He keeps reminding me of a young Alan Rickman for some reason). The film lacks the intricacies of the BBC miniseries and skips out on many of the subplots, which is hardly unexpected given the length of the film. Minor characters such as Mr. and Mrs. Hurst, Mary King, and Mariah Lucas were left out completely.

The film is a worthwhile effort but, in the end, Wright attempted to capture more that a mere two hours would allow. I enjoyed the BBC version over this one, but, to be fair, if you take away comparisons to previous versions, this film on its own proves to be a beautifully delicate interpretation of Jane Austen’s masterpiece.

In General:
B  Movie
A- Performance
C- Script
A  Love Story
C+ Execution of Love Story

Happy Feet Trailer Out

Saturday, November 19th, 2005 at 8:29 am

Blur Studio’s doing it, The Orphanage’s doing it, so why not Australia’s Animal Logic? Animal Logic joins the club of effects houses turned feature animation studios with Happy Feet, a film seemingly about a lot of penguins dancing. The film features an all star cast including Robin Williams, Nicole Kidman, Hugh Jackman, Elijah Wood, and Brittany Murphy. The trailer shows a sea of dancing penguins based on motion capture (humans not penguins). Check out the trailer for yourself.

10 Candidates for Animation Nomination

Friday, November 18th, 2005 at 7:25 am

Six full CG-features made the list of ten animated features deemed eligible by the Academy of Motion Picture Arts and Sciences, which allows a total of 3 nominees for the Oscar for Best Animated Feature. This list include Chicken Little from Disney Animation, Gulliver’s Travels from the India-based Pentamedia Graphics, Hoodwinked from Weinstein, Co., Miyazaki’s Howl’s Moving Castle, Madagascar from Dreamworks Animatiom, Robots from Blue Sky Animation, Otomo’s Steamboy, Tim Burton’s Corpse Bride, Valiant from Vanguard Animation, and, last but not least. Wallace & Gromit: The Curse of the Were-Rabbit from Aardman Animation.

This may be thought of as a weak year for computer animation with no Pixar production in the running, and half of the candidate film being newcomer films from studios that had never before released a feature length computer animation. However, it is certainly a good year for stop motion animation with Wallace and Gromit and Corpse Bride both receiving critic-acclaim and box-office success. So who will be nominated? We won’t know until Jan. 31, 2006, but I would put my money on Wallace and Gromit, Corpse Bride, and Madagascar, with Wallace and Gromit taking home the Oscar. We’ll find out in a few months if I am right.

Movie Review: Reality Bites

Sunday, November 13th, 2005 at 6:44 am
Reality Bites

Movie title: Reality Bites
Starring: Winona Ryder, Ethan Hawke, Janeane Garofalo, Steve Zahn, Ben Stiller
Directed by: Ben Stiller
Written by: Helen Childress
Genre: Drama, Romance, Comedy
Year: 1994

Maybe it’s just that I’m approaching that post collegiate angst period of life, but there is something in Reality Bites that is very real and revealing about stepping into the world for the first time. In my depressive “what to do with the rest of my life” state, Reality Bites has been something to ponder, to relate to, and simply to enjoy.

Reality Bites is an angst-ridden glimpse of life after college for 4 Generation X-ers. Lelaina Pierce (Winona Ryder) is a woman with her own ideals and big dreams to become a documentary filmmaker. She gets her first taste of post-collegiate life when she takes a job at a TV station and moves into an apartment with her college roommate Vickie (Janeane Garofalo). Soon they are joined by another college friend, Troy (Ethan Hawke), a man who chose not to graduate college in favor of his philosophical views on society and has been in love with her for some time. Lelaina shows antagonism towards Troy from the start, and ultimately ends up in a relationship with Troy’s opposite–a yuppie TV exec, Michael played by Ben Stiller. Ultimately, this story deals with characters facing bleak realities that come with idealism, love, and career.

The interesting thing is that the characters are not necessarily likeable, but they grow on you as you watch them slowly let go of the adolescent ideals of their identity. Strangely enough, the film is uplifting despite a depressing subject nature. There’s no wrong or right, and the film is structured in such a way that you can still relate to the characters without necessarily agreeing with them, yet they belong to a unique generation. The film is accompanied by a great soundtrack that carries you through a glimpse of the 90’s.

In General:
B+ Movie
B+ Performance
B+ Script
A+ Music
A- Love Story

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